today we put commas in our writing

Big Tims big run 

              "I was sitting on a rock”.My dog tim went for a walk On the beach.he ate a blue bottle jellyfish.It stung tim in the mouth.So I went to have a look at it. And then a tsunami came smashing through the rocks. “My dog tim became giant” so he ran as fast as he could up the hill to the car park.

we don't big dog writing to day.  

Storyboardthat

Yesterday me and my friends made a storyboard, this is what we made.